I just rewrote _Sufficiently Advanced Printing_ again.

[juniper]

Or finished the rewrite rewrite. I can't believe I was submitting that thing. What a piece of junk. Granted, it was the first thing I actually successfully did BRAWL rewrites on, but ugh, no wonder it was collecting rejection letters.

I mean, it's *still* going to collect rejection letters, but at least now it's less deserving of them.

Fly, little story. Try to find a nest that's *not* feathered with rejections...

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[juniper]

I remember that I was thoroughly sick of this piece the last time I rewrote it, so that's likely part of the problem. But I can definitely say I'm improving.

Whether it's enough? That's up in the air. ;)